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The text "Quick Start Guide" with the subheading "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is a typical instructive text. Because of the facts, which I want to write down now.
A attribute of this text type is for example, that the author gives advice to the reader what in which way to do. Nearly every sentence has such attribute, for example "...figure out..." or "...hook up...". So the author would that the reader do something in the right way.
The second characteristic is to influence the audience, that means: the reader must do it in this way to present a good result. So concerning this text you must add the DVD player in this way. Unless you can not watch something.
The author took short sentences, that the reader can remember the step, which he has to do.
These points show, that the text "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is an instructive text.
würde mich freuen wenn jemand diesen text heute noch korrigieren könnte =) schonmal danke im vorraus =)
Ich habe diese Frage in keinem Forum auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 18:31 Do 11.10.2007 | | Autor: | moody |
ohne den text komplett gelesen zu haben
> Because of the facts, which I want to write down now.
geht mal gar nicht^^
Ich bin eh kein Freund von Ich werde nun erklären Formulierungen in Analysen.
The text "Quick Start Guide" with the subheading "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is a typical instructive text for the following reasons:
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The text "Quick Start Guide" with the subheading "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is a typical instructive text.
Und dann einfach anfangen zu erklären warum z.b. "Bla Blub" (line XX) is a clear hint for this.
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Hi Prinschipezza !
Zu deinem Text:
The text "Quick Start Guide" with the subheading "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is a typical instructive text(,). Bbecause of the facts, which I wantam going to to write down now.(besser falls dieser Teil bleiben soll: (,) because of the reasons I am going to enlist in the following.)
An attribute of this text type is for example, that the author gives advice to the reader on what to do in which way to do.(is...,that.. ist ein Germanismus, außerdem nie Komma vor that; besser: Characteristic for this type of text are prompting expressions, such as....They can be found in nearly every sentence.)
(Nearly every sentence has such an attribute, for example "...figure out..." or "...hook up...".) So the author would thatwants the reader to do something in the right way.(besser:....wants the reader to act as intended, i.e. (=id est,gesprochen that means) he wants him to buy his product.)
Nicht korrigiert:
[The second characteristic is to influence the audience, that means: the reader must do it in this way to present a good result. So concerning this text you must add the DVD player in this way. Unless you can not watch something.]
Furthermore, the author tookhas used short sentences, that the reader can remember the step, which he has to do.in order to make the reader remember (his product) very easily.
These points show,Now it is evident that the text "Hook up your DVD player, speakers, subwoofer and TV" is an instructive text.
P.S.: Du solltest dir vor (!) dem Schreiben Gedanken über deinen Aufbau bzw. deine Argumentation machen, da du sonst die eigentlich gut erfassten Sachverhalte nicht klar rüberbringen kannst.
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