Primary < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 18:01 Mo 24.11.2008 | | Autor: | Zirbe |
| Aufgabe | | Beschreibung des Wortes Primary |
Hallo,
wir sollen das Wort "Primary" in ein paar Sätzen beschreiben und ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr mir das korrigieren könntet :)
Primary means the first activity of something, for example the primary school, which is the first school for young children, or the primary election in the USA. The primary election is an method of the parties to advance candidates for public offices. Also it gives the open and the closed primary. In an open primary, every authorized voter is allowed zu take part in every primaries of every party. In a closed primary, every voter has to make public his party preferences.
Vielen Dank schon mal :)
Lg
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Hallo,
Sorry, hat doch etwas länger gedauert!
Hier ein paar Dinge , die du in deinem Text noch ändern solltest:
1. "Primary" ist im ersten Fall ein Adjektiv, also kann es keine "activity" sein sondern nur "description of an action"
Also könntest du beginnen mit:
"Primary is an adjective, which is used to describe an action as the main, basic or first one happening, for example...." Danach müsstest du das Substantiv "primary" (also die Wahl) erklären.
2. das Kommma nach "for young children" streichen
3. a method statt an method
4. "There also are..." statt " Also it gives"
5. Vorletzter Satz eher: "In an open primary all authorised voters are allowed to take part in any election of the existing parties."
6. "...every voter has to publicise his party preferences"
Viele Grüße, Priyanka
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