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Leila W.
Aspir Internation Consultants plc.
Aspir House
Bromle
Ken BR7 3ZB
Application for the secretary position, no. E5972
Dear Ms Wyatt,
I should like to apply for the secretary position advertised on the Aspir Int. website..
After completing my education with the German university entrance qualification at the Alfred-Krupp Comprehensive, I did a two-year traineeship as a commercial assistant at the Ludwig-Erhard vocational college in Essen.
My main subjects included secretarial duties and office administration. I passed my exams as a foreign language correspondent in English in March 2008.
Besides, I have done a practical with the offices of Reading City Council and I worked two years as a part-time employment at Freight Forwarders Kleine und Nagel.
Due to my traineeship, I have a excellent telephone manner and communication skills. Moreover, I have a good computer knowledge including the Audio Typing and I am familiar with Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
I am eloquent in English and German and I have a working knowledge of French.
I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates.
I hope that you consider my application suitable and give me the opportunity to present myself at an interview.
Yours sincerely
Nadia W.
Enclosures
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Danke für die Korrektur
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 18:46 Sa 25.10.2008 | | Autor: | mmhkt |
Guten Abend,
auf die Schnelle zwei Kleinigkeiten:
> Leila W.
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> Aspir Internation Consultants plc.
> Aspir House
> Bromle
> Ken BR7 3ZB
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> Application for the secretary position, no. E5972
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> Dear Ms Wyatt,
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> I should (should=sollte - hm, wer sagt, Du solltest...) like to apply for the secretary position
> advertised on the Aspir Int. website..
>
> After completing my education with the German university
> entrance qualification at the Alfred-Krupp Comprehensive, I
> did a two-year traineeship as a commercial assistant at the
> Ludwig-Erhard vocational college in Essen.
> My main subjects included secretarial duties and office
> administration. I passed my exams as a foreign language
> correspondent in English in March 2008.
>
> Besides, I have done a practical with the offices of
> Reading City Council and I worked two years as a part-time
> employment at Freight Forwarders Kleine und Nagel.
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> Due to my traineeship, I have a (wie war das nochmal mit dem "a" wenn das folgende Wort mit einem Vokal anfängt - da kommt doch noch was dran, ans "a" nämlich...)excellent telephone manner
> and communication skills. Moreover, I have a good computer
> knowledge including the Audio Typing and I am familiar with
> Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
> I am eloquent in English and German and I have a working
> knowledge of French.
>
> I enclose my CV and certified translations of my
> certificates.
>
> I hope that you consider my application suitable and give
> me the opportunity to present myself at an interview.
>
> Yours sincerely
> Nadia W.
> Enclosures
>
Momentan fällt mir sonst nichts auf, aber vielleicht kommt noch jemand anderes daher und sieht noch was.
Also dann, schönes Wochenende!
mmhkt
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(Antwort) fertig | | Datum: | 21:26 So 26.10.2008 | | Autor: | Maluues |
Leila W.
Aspir Internation Consultants plc.
Aspir House
Bromle
Ken BR7 3ZB
Application for the secretary position, no. E5972
Dear Ms Wyatt,
I should( wie schon geschrieben sollte hier would hin ) like to apply for the secretary position advertised on the Aspir Int. website..
After completing my education with the German university entrance qualification at the Alfred-Krupp Comprehensive, I did a two-year traineeship as a commercial assistant at the Ludwig-Erhard vocational college in Essen.
My main subjects included secretarial duties and office administration. I passed my exams as a foreign language correspondent in English in March 2008.
Besides, I have done a practical with the offices of Reading City Council and I worked two years as a part-time employment at Freight Forwarders Kleine und Nagel.
Due to my traineeship, I have a (hier muss ein N dran) excellent telephone manner and (hier sollte noch ein adjektiv hin) communication skills. Moreover, I have a ( statt have würde ich possess schreiben) good computer knowledge including the Audio Typing and I am familiar with Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
I am eloquent in English and German and I have a working knowledge of French.
I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates.
I hope that you consider my application suitable and give me the opportunity to present myself at an interview.
Yours sincerely
Nadia W.
Enclosures
Soweit würde ich es verbessern.
Grüße
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