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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 16:12 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
Hallo
Also ich muss ein Referat machen :(.Das thema ist : Du bist marketin chef deines dorfes und musst leute anwerben ;). Hoffe auf fleißige korrekturleser die vll noch ein paar tips für die verbesserung haben
Today we will present you a village you have ever dreamed of. You want to have mountains, seaside,nature, seafellings and a high variety of leisure time facilities?? Then this is exactly the right place for you to be.
The place where all your holiday dreams will come true is called Schluchse.
Now you are wondering where such a fantastic resort is located. We will give you the opportunity to find it out. So lean back and enjoy our trip to a region you will never forget.
Schluchsee is a German resort which is about 930-1300m above sealevel. It is located in the south west of the federal state BW more precisely in an area which is called the black forest. The black forest is Germany´s largest low mountain range and for the most part densely wooded. Our village is situated at a lake with the same name which is about 7,5 km long and 1,4 km wide.
Whether you think about your last holidays abroad you may have to think about a disaster of bad accomandation, grumpy children and boring days you spend in your holiday home because the tv programme was more interesting than everything else out there.
Forget such frustrating holidays where you got back more stressed out than you had been before.
Our resort will compensate you for all your bad holiday experiences.
No matter which season with its high variety of leisure time facilities and wellness Schluchsee offers something for everyone.
........(noch lange nicht fertig :) )
LG Susi
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Hey Susi![[winken]](/images/smileys/winken.gif "[winken]") ,
Ich mache mal die erste Korrektur, vielleicht macht der Analytiker ja die Zweite, wenn er neben dem ganzen juristen Kram noch die Zeit dafür aufbringen kann 
> Today we will present you a village you have ever dreamed
> of. You want to have mountains, seaside,nature, seafellings
> and a high variety of leisure time facilities.
Was willst du mit dem letzten Abschnitt sagen?
> Then this is this exactly the right place for you to be.
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> The place where all your holiday dreams will come true is
> called Schluchse.
> Now you are wondering where such a fantastic resort is
> located. We will give you the opportunity to find it out.
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> So lean back zu umgangssprachlich. Besser: relax and enjoy our trip to a region you will never
> forget.
> Schluchsee is a German resort which is about 930-1300m
> above sealevel.
It is located in the south west of the
> federal state BW -auschreiben!-more precisely in an
> area which is called the black forest.
> The black forest is Germany´s largest low
> mountain range and for the most part densely wooded. Our
> village is situated at a lake with the same name which is
> about 7,5 km long and 1,4 km wide.
> Whether you think about your last holidays abroad you may
> have to think about a disaster of bad accomandation, grumpy
> children and boring days you spend in your holiday home
> because the tv programme was more interesting than
> everything else out there.
> Forget such frustrating holidays where you got back more
> stressed out than you had been before.
> Our resort will compensate you for all your bad holiday
> experiences.
> No matter which season with its high variety of leisure
> time facilities and wellness Schluchsee offers something
> for everyone.
Bis hierhin gar nicht mal schlecht.
Liebe Grüße,
Sarah 
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 17:10 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
Hallo
Danke für die korrektur :). Ich muss das refeat nicht abgeben > demnach is das BW nur dort weil ich zu faul zum schreiben war *g*. Und das mit der umgangssprache hm na ja muss damit ja nich zur uni und die hälfe der leute in meiner klasse wird eh kein wort verstehen ;).
LG Susi
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 18:55 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
Hallo
Nächste korrekturphase :).
Today we will present you a village you have ever dreamed of. You want to have mountains, seaside,nature, seafellings and a high variety of leisure time facilities?? Then this is exactly the right place for you to be.
The place where all your holiday dreams will come true is called Schluchse.
Now you are wondering where such a fantastic resort is located. We will give you the opportunity to find it out. So lean back and enjoy our trip to a region you will never forget.
Schluchsee is a German resort which is about 930-1300m above sealevel. It is located in the south west of the federal state BW more precisely in an area which is called the black forest. The black forest is Germany´s largest low mountain range and for the most part densely wooded. Our village is situated at a lake with the same name which is about 7,5 km long and 1,4 km wide.
Whether you think about your last holidays abroad you may have to think about a disaster of bad accomandation, grumpy children and boring days you spend in your holiday home because the tv programme was more interesting than everything else out there.
Forget such frustrating holidays where you got back more stressed out than you had been before.
Our resort will compensate you for all your bad holiday experiences.
We want everyone also parents to enjoy and relax. We know to keep the kids happy is one of the most important thing on family holidays.But sometimes that can be very stressful. So we offer all kinds of child-friendly accomandation as well as professional childcare.
This makes it possible for parents to do dip in our beautiful nature or to give their undivided attention to our leisure time facilities without caring about their children.
No matter which season with its high variety of leisure time facilities and wellness Schluchsee offers something for everyone.
In summer our beautiful lake is adapted for every kind of water sports like swimming, paddling, diving, sailing or surfing.
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LG Susi
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 20:24 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
Hallöle
Also das soll ungefähr heißen :)
No matter which season with its high variety of leisure
> time facilities and wellness Schluchsee offers something
> for everyone.
Egal welche jahreszeit mit seiner großen Vielfalt an freizeitangeboten bieten Schluchsee für jeden was bzw is für jeden was dabei oder so ;)
LG Susi
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 20:50 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
Hallo
Hm wenn ich aber ein egal welche haben will :-p
Wollt immer schonaml ein egal einbauen.
LG Susi
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 22:07 So 20.05.2007 | | Autor: | SusaSch |
huhu
ich bins nochmal> wegen meinem egal :
kann ich nicht schreiben.
It doesn t matter whether summer or winter during every season, Schluchsee offers.....
Lg Susi
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Vielleicht so:
The opening hours don't subject to seasonal influences.
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