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(Frage) beantwortet | Datum: | 17:19 Di 17.11.2009 | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo
Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand drüber schauen könnte und die "groben" Fehler korrigieren könnte
Among the green house gases are distinguished difference classes.
Since the last two century the green house gases has increased rapidly and their concentration has been been “verdoppelt”
A lot of species will be extinction because of the climate change.
When you think about your childrend how will you justify why they have to bear consequences for that we are responsible
We are live connected with the US president Barack Obama
Although prediction can’t be made very exactly, it’s sure that the issue will be topics of conversation also in the future.
Now, I would like to compare the temperature of these bottles. As you can see, the bottle possessing the cutout has a lower temperature than the unprepared one. This bottle, having the heat radiating light inside their hollow, absorbs much more warmth, consequently.
Vielen Dnak für deine Bemühungen
Gruss DInker
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(Antwort) noch nicht fertig | Datum: | 17:29 Di 17.11.2009 | Autor: | Pogohasi |
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> Among the green house gases are distinguished difference
> classes.
--> Was soll das genau auf deutsch heißen?
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> Since the last two century the green house gases has
> increased rapidly and their concentration has been been
> “verdoppelt”
--> Within the last two centuries the emission of greenhouse gas has increased rapidly and its concentration has doubled.
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> A lot of species will be extinction because of the climate
> change.
--> A lot of species will be on the brink of extinction because of the climate change.
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> When you think about your childrend how will you justify
> why they have to bear consequences for that we are
> responsible
--> Was ist damit gemeint?
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> We are live connected with the US president Barack Obama
--> Was meinst du?
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> Although prediction can’t be made very exactly, it’s
> sure that the issue will be topics of conversation also in
> the future.
--> Although it is not predictable, we all know, that...
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> Now, I would like to compare the temperature of these
> bottles. As you can see, the bottle possessing the cutout
> has a lower temperature than the unprepared one. This
> bottle, having the heat radiating light inside their
> hollow, absorbs much more warmth, consequently.
>
> Vielen Dnak für deine Bemühungen
>
> Gruss DInker
Ich hoffe,ich konnte schon ein bisschen helfen^^
Liebe Grüße
ju
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | Datum: | 19:15 Di 17.11.2009 | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo Pogohasi
Vielen Dank für deine ersten Korrekturen
Gruss DInker
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